How to Write a Damn Good Thriller

The villain is your best friend, because the villain creates the plot behind the plot—the plot that has to be foiled by the hero—and that, my friend, is what thriller writing is all about.

Villain profile. A compelling villain should fit a specific profile:

• Powerful and influential

• Motivated by base desires (greed, revenge, ambition)

• Often psychopathic or psychotic

• Self-centered, narcissistic, and vain

• Coldhearted, merciless, and ruthless

• Determined, cunning, and clever

• Seemingly unstoppable and relentless

To create your villain:

1. Develop a detailed backstory (physiology, sociology, psychology)

2. Give them a dark mission that drives the plot

3. Write in their voice through journals or diaries

4. Ensure they fit the villain profile while remaining unique

Remember, the villain's actions and motivations are the engine of your thriller's plot. Their dark mission creates the conflict that your hero must overcome.

Heroes are courageous. In comic thrillers sometimes they aren't, but in almost all other types of thrillers they are as courageous as a canonball.

Hero profile. A compelling thriller hero should possess:

• Courage in the face of danger

• Expertise in their profession

• A special talent or skill

• Cleverness and resourcefulness

• A wound or vulnerability

• An outlaw quality (making their own rules)

• Self-sacrificing nature for others

Developing your hero:

1. Create a detailed backstory, including their wound

2. Give them a special talent that sets them apart

3. Ensure they're clever and resourceful in overcoming obstacles

4. Make them self-sacrificing, willing to risk everything for others

5. Consider giving them a flaw or vulnerability to make them relatable

Remember, your hero doesn't need to be likable or good, but they should be compelling and someone the reader can root for as they face seemingly impossible odds.

To create a damn good thriller, construct it on the following seven pillars. Leave any one out and you may fail.

The seven pillars of a damn good thriller:

1. High stakes: Lives, sanity, or the fate of humanity should be at risk

2. Unity of opposites: The hero can't escape the challenge

3. Seemingly impossible odds: It should appear the hero can't possibly win

4. Moral struggle: Clear right and wrong, with the hero on the side of right

5. Ticking clock: A deadline creates urgency and keeps readers engaged

6. Menace: Constant danger for the hero and other characters

7. Thriller-type characters: Clever and resourceful heroes and villains

When plotting your thriller, continually check that you're incorporating these elements. They create the tension, excitement, and moral weight that readers expect from the genre.

You may think that I'm focusing a lot of attention on the opening of the story. The reason is that it is the most important part. If you do not have a gripping opening to your thriller, it is unlikely that you will dazzle an agent and woo an editor.

Opening strategies:

• Start with the villain's dark mission

• Show a minor character in terrible trouble

• Put the hero in immediate peril

• Begin with the hero already on their mission

Key elements for a gripping opening:

1. Raise strong story questions

2. Create immediate conflict or danger

3. Introduce a situation of injustice

4. Use vivid, sensory details to draw readers in

5. Avoid dream sequences or extensive backstory

To maintain suspense throughout:

• Keep raising new story questions

• Introduce unexpected complications

• Use cliffhangers at chapter ends

• Gradually reveal information about characters and plot

• Maintain a sense of constant menace or danger

Remember, your goal is to make the reader desperate to know what happens next, compelling them to keep turning pages.

To simplify things, I'll break up my step sheet for Peace Day into the five movements we already discussed so that it will be easier to follow.

Five-movement thriller structure:

1. The gripping opening: Introduce characters, raise story questions

2. The evil plot unfolds: Hero fights defensively, gathering information

3. The turning point: Hero goes on the offensive

4. Confrontation and climax: Hero faces villain in final showdown

5. Resolution: Wrap up loose ends, show impact on characters

Creating a step sheet:

1. Break your story into these five movements

2. Under each movement, list key plot points and scenes

3. For each step, include:

   • Character motivations and conflicts

   • Important story questions raised or answered

   • Key information revealed

   • Emotional impact on characters and readers

Benefits of using a step sheet:

• Helps you visualize the entire story arc

• Makes it easier to identify and fix plot holes

• Allows for quick revisions and restructuring

• Ensures you're maintaining suspense and conflict throughout

Remember to keep your step sheet flexible, allowing for changes as you discover new ideas during the writing process.

To write dramatic conflict dialogue and have information conveyed in it is not all that difficult. You just need to give characters an agenda.

Keys to compelling dialogue:

• Give every character an agenda or goal in the scene

• Ensure characters' goals conflict with each other

• Avoid "on-the-nose" dialogue where characters say exactly what they mean

• Use subtext to convey deeper meanings and emotions

• Break up dialogue with action and internal thoughts

Techniques for conflict-driven scenes:

1. Start with a clear understanding of each character's motivation

2. Introduce obstacles that prevent characters from achieving their goals

3. Use "Show, don't tell" to convey emotions and reactions

4. Incorporate sensory details to bring the scene to life

5. End scenes with new complications or revelations

Avoid common pitfalls:

• Back-and-forth dialogue with no conflict

• Informational dialogue that serves only to convey facts

• Scenes without clear character motivations or goals

Remember, every scene should move the story forward and reveal something new about the characters or plot. If a scene doesn't serve this purpose, consider cutting or revising it.

The opening of the story is the most important part, but the climax is the most exciting. A great climax (and the resolution that follows it) will leave the audience feeling satisfied.

Elements of a damn good thriller climax:

• Hero nearly dies but ultimately prevails

• Good triumphs over evil (except in some literary thrillers)

• Incorporate surprising twists or revelations

• Use fresh, innovative confrontation methods

• Reveal character growth or insights

• Consider including a significant loss for the hero

• In rare cases, the hero may die (but usually after achieving their goal)

Steps to craft your climax:

1. Build tension throughout the climactic sequence

2. Raise the stakes to their highest point

3. Create a moment where all seems lost for the hero

4. Reveal the hero's clever plan or final burst of courage

5. Resolve the central conflict decisively

6. Provide an emotional payoff for the reader

Tips for a memorable climax:

• Tie up major plot threads, but leave some mystery for the resolution

• Ensure the hero's actions are consistent with their character arc

• Use vivid, sensory details to make the scene come alive

• Pace the action carefully, alternating between intense moments and brief pauses

• Consider a dual climax structure for added excitement

Remember, your climax should be the most thrilling and emotionally satisfying part of your story, leaving readers breathless and eager to see how everything wraps up in the resolution.